01/25/06, 01:34 AM | #1 |
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Hang Up!
Sitting all alone
talking on the phone. Wishing this would end on a better note. Knowing that it won't. She's fallen for another and knocked the wind out of me. And with my own "brother". I try to act strong. I can only wonder how long she will allow my pain to last. and finally put me in the past. We've gone through too much for it all to end with a single touch of a button she lets the call and our love end. Some other people liked this from another Emma Forum so I thought I would put it here. Keep in mind I wrote this in like 5 min. |
01/25/06, 04:47 PM | #2 |
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it pretty cool. i love it.
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01/25/06, 10:13 PM | #3 |
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For a 5 min poem, it sure is awesome!
-Razi
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01/26/06, 12:11 AM | #4 |
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Thanks guys I am glad that you like it. I am still going to try to write more poems at some point. But now I am trying to get somewhere with my Fan Fic.
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01/26/06, 10:42 AM | #5 |
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Hey yeah that's great for five minutes! Nice rhyming too
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03/19/06, 05:35 AM | #6 |
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I ran into my ex again the one this is about and I think writing this helped me get over it a lil more cause I didn't even have any ill feelings towards her this time.
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